Sunday, September 13, 2009

A childhood wish



Often in my dreams
I see the shallow streams
And the women singing in the paddy fields
the monsoon rains that makes the fields flood
And the morning sunlight that blooms every bud
the frogs in the streams that croak melodiously
the meditative painted storks that move cautiously

With a streak of white in my hair
and visible wrinkles on my cheeks
A splash of colours on my canvas
and the weather all calm and serene
I live and paint this lively scene
I live and paint this lively scene


One time in my childhood my father was posted in a small cantonment called Hempur (Uttaranchal) located between Kashipur and Ramnagar. And everyday while going to school I use to relish the countryside and wished that sometime later in my life i comeback and live in this place again. I still hope that my childhood wish comes true.

47 comments:

manivannan September 13, 2009 1:03 AM  

WOW! Beautiful lines...superbly written. Well done sneha!

May your childhood wish come true :-)

Have a great week ahead!

Vishwanath Seshadri September 13, 2009 1:24 AM  

Very nice nostalgic poem... Uttranchal is one of my favourite getaways too.. I have been there more than half a dozen times and I am madly in love with that place.. What beauty, what peace, what gentle people...

thanks for a lovely post :)

Dhanya September 13, 2009 3:36 AM  

Countrysides have a charm of their own :)

Lovely poem!

M S Ahluwalia September 13, 2009 4:16 AM  

very nice.. hope your wish comes true :)

Hobo ........ ........ ........ September 13, 2009 8:06 AM  

Each one dream The same.
:.(

Mulling Over My Thoughts September 13, 2009 9:35 AM  

Life is long! You'll be there soon enough!

♪♪HARINI♪♪ September 13, 2009 9:50 AM  

That was such a beautiful poem
the first half reminded my of "the solitary reaper"

It seemed all so professional!!

I hope your dream comes true too!!
But once youre old enough and want things badly enough, you can get them..
Or that what I believe cos Im not old enough :(

SiMbA tAgO September 13, 2009 12:45 PM  

an excellent dream to live for... really greats.... and yeah i wish it come true...

and excellent theme.. loved it

KParthasarathi September 13, 2009 6:12 PM  

You have captured the scene in your lines so beautifully.I have travelled by road to Kahsipur from Delhi many times and could relate with what you have said.

KParthasarathi September 13, 2009 7:10 PM  

Can you pl tell me how to make a slide of awards as you have done
the instructions must be detailed stepwise as I am not compm savvy.They occupy less space.
kpartha12@gmail.com

Sneha September 13, 2009 7:45 PM  

@ KParthasarathi ,

Please check your mailbox i just replied to you.:)
Hope its helpful.

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:27 PM  

@ mani,

Thanks.
have a nice day,:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:29 PM  

@ Vishwanath Seshdri,

Thanks for appreciating.

I have some excellent memories of this place.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:30 PM  

@ Dhanya,

You bet.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:30 PM  

@ M S Ahluwalia,

Thanks.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:31 PM  

@ hobo,
I am sure you are right.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:32 PM  

@ Bikram,
Hmmmm.

have a nice day.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:33 PM  

@ harini,

Thanks sweety.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:33 PM  

@ simbatago,

Thanks for the appreciation.:)

Sneha September 13, 2009 8:34 PM  

@ KParthasarathi,

Thanks.:)

Gaurav Kant Goel September 13, 2009 10:08 PM  

Good piece of poetry Sneha. may your wish come true soon!!!!

numerounity September 14, 2009 5:14 AM  

My first time i guess and that was a wonderful poem!

I am sitting near the big glass pane and can imagine the hills as described by you...

Sneha September 14, 2009 9:42 PM  

Thanks Gaurav.:)

How is your little one?

Sneha September 14, 2009 9:43 PM  

Welcome to my blog Ekta.:)
I am glad that you enjoyed the post.:)

have a nice day.:)

shri ramesh sadasivam September 14, 2009 10:07 PM  

Beautiful poem!

Hope ur childhood wish comes true!

Sneha September 14, 2009 10:38 PM  

Thanks Ramesh.:)

have a nice day.:)

Ria September 14, 2009 11:21 PM  

lovely poem and i hope u r able to fulfill ur wish!! :)

Sneha September 15, 2009 7:11 PM  

Thanks ria.:)

Mustaf September 16, 2009 2:23 AM  

Anyone who has seen the countryside or spent some time in life in those countryside knows the beauty of it and everyone has the same dream in their eyes.But unfortunately hardly those dreams come true :-( They are truly lucky who gets to make this beautiful dream comes true..I envy them :)

Krishna September 16, 2009 11:13 AM  

nice poem :)

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Amrita~Ams September 20, 2009 6:57 AM  

trie bein gal :)
liked it

Surya Kannan October 7, 2009 4:20 AM  

Amazing words and more amazing blog :)

manivannan October 14, 2009 10:42 AM  

Hi Sneha!

HRU? Just dropped in to say HI :-) Guess you must be busy with your exams. And hope your doing great!

It's been really long you posted...if you find time, do write :-)

My best wishes to you :-)
Take care!

Mulling Over My Thoughts October 19, 2009 11:02 AM  

Hi Sneha, it's been pretty long since you've put up a post or commented on anything...where have you been?

crackpot November 4, 2009 7:34 AM  

amazing...choice of words :)

Sneha November 28, 2009 9:03 PM  

@ krishna, Amrita,mustaf, surya

Thnaks.:)

Sneha November 28, 2009 9:07 PM  

@ Mani & Bikram

Sorry for replying late as I had gone to India for a long vacation.

Thanks for your wishes and did
pretty well in Exams.:)

Hope you all are doing well.

Cheers !!!

Sneha November 28, 2009 9:08 PM  

@ Crackpot,

thanks.:)

Mulling Over My Thoughts November 29, 2009 1:49 AM  

Hey!
Did you visit the shallow streams and the paddy fields on your trip then?
:)

Sneha November 29, 2009 10:12 AM  

@ Bikram

nahi yaar, Soney, khaney or batiyaney sey fursat hee nahi mili.:)

abhishek November 29, 2009 10:28 AM  

oye! kidhar ho?

Sneha November 29, 2009 10:37 AM  

@ Abhishek,

ghar gai hui thi wapas aa gai. Or suna naukri kasi chall rehi hai?

Ria December 1, 2009 10:22 PM  

Beautifully written....and hey u hav got a nice blog. :)

Sneha December 2, 2009 5:27 PM  

Thanks Ria.:)

the poet manque December 5, 2009 9:13 PM  

Amusing and decribed to the very detail.



Sv the poet manqué

Sneha December 8, 2009 11:45 PM  

@the poet manque,

Thanks