A childhood wish
Often in my dreams
I see the shallow streams
And the women singing in the paddy fields
the monsoon rains that makes the fields flood
And the morning sunlight that blooms every bud
the frogs in the streams that croak melodiously
the meditative painted storks that move cautiously
With a streak of white in my hair
and visible wrinkles on my cheeks
A splash of colours on my canvas
and the weather all calm and serene
I live and paint this lively scene
I live and paint this lively scene
One time in my childhood my father was posted in a small cantonment called Hempur (Uttaranchal) located between Kashipur and Ramnagar. And everyday while going to school I use to relish the countryside and wished that sometime later in my life i comeback and live in this place again. I still hope that my childhood wish comes true.

47 comments:
WOW! Beautiful lines...superbly written. Well done sneha!
May your childhood wish come true :-)
Have a great week ahead!
Very nice nostalgic poem... Uttranchal is one of my favourite getaways too.. I have been there more than half a dozen times and I am madly in love with that place.. What beauty, what peace, what gentle people...
thanks for a lovely post :)
Countrysides have a charm of their own :)
Lovely poem!
very nice.. hope your wish comes true :)
Each one dream The same.
:.(
Life is long! You'll be there soon enough!
That was such a beautiful poem
the first half reminded my of "the solitary reaper"
It seemed all so professional!!
I hope your dream comes true too!!
But once youre old enough and want things badly enough, you can get them..
Or that what I believe cos Im not old enough :(
an excellent dream to live for... really greats.... and yeah i wish it come true...
and excellent theme.. loved it
You have captured the scene in your lines so beautifully.I have travelled by road to Kahsipur from Delhi many times and could relate with what you have said.
Can you pl tell me how to make a slide of awards as you have done
the instructions must be detailed stepwise as I am not compm savvy.They occupy less space.
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@ KParthasarathi ,
Please check your mailbox i just replied to you.:)
Hope its helpful.
@ mani,
Thanks.
have a nice day,:)
@ Vishwanath Seshdri,
Thanks for appreciating.
I have some excellent memories of this place.:)
@ Dhanya,
You bet.:)
@ M S Ahluwalia,
Thanks.:)
@ hobo,
I am sure you are right.:)
@ Bikram,
Hmmmm.
have a nice day.:)
@ harini,
Thanks sweety.:)
@ simbatago,
Thanks for the appreciation.:)
@ KParthasarathi,
Thanks.:)
Good piece of poetry Sneha. may your wish come true soon!!!!
My first time i guess and that was a wonderful poem!
I am sitting near the big glass pane and can imagine the hills as described by you...
Thanks Gaurav.:)
How is your little one?
Welcome to my blog Ekta.:)
I am glad that you enjoyed the post.:)
have a nice day.:)
Beautiful poem!
Hope ur childhood wish comes true!
Thanks Ramesh.:)
have a nice day.:)
lovely poem and i hope u r able to fulfill ur wish!! :)
Thanks ria.:)
Anyone who has seen the countryside or spent some time in life in those countryside knows the beauty of it and everyone has the same dream in their eyes.But unfortunately hardly those dreams come true :-( They are truly lucky who gets to make this beautiful dream comes true..I envy them :)
nice poem :)
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trie bein gal :)
liked it
Amazing words and more amazing blog :)
Hi Sneha!
HRU? Just dropped in to say HI :-) Guess you must be busy with your exams. And hope your doing great!
It's been really long you posted...if you find time, do write :-)
My best wishes to you :-)
Take care!
Hi Sneha, it's been pretty long since you've put up a post or commented on anything...where have you been?
amazing...choice of words :)
@ krishna, Amrita,mustaf, surya
Thnaks.:)
@ Mani & Bikram
Sorry for replying late as I had gone to India for a long vacation.
Thanks for your wishes and did
pretty well in Exams.:)
Hope you all are doing well.
Cheers !!!
@ Crackpot,
thanks.:)
Hey!
Did you visit the shallow streams and the paddy fields on your trip then?
:)
@ Bikram
nahi yaar, Soney, khaney or batiyaney sey fursat hee nahi mili.:)
oye! kidhar ho?
@ Abhishek,
ghar gai hui thi wapas aa gai. Or suna naukri kasi chall rehi hai?
Beautifully written....and hey u hav got a nice blog. :)
Thanks Ria.:)
Amusing and decribed to the very detail.
Sv the poet manqué
@the poet manque,
Thanks
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