Monday, June 22, 2009

A Young Vine


A young green vine

In search of a support

Twines around the seemingly benign rose bush

Unaware of its duplicity

Gets stinged by the thorns

Then

Falls back on the ground

Pained and abused



| --To mark the plight of young children rampant all around us--|


24 comments:

Dhanya said...

Deep and thoughtful! :) Loved it..

Arv said...

Loved the interpretation :)

nice one mate... cheers...

tulipspeaks said...

It's beautifully written.
First time here. :)


ammu.

Pallav said...

u knw the way u wrote.. its awesome..
i loved it...

waisey sab wadiya hai na.. ek dum se achanak se aisi post....

Cheers
Pallav

Sneha said...

@ Pallav,
haan yaar saab thik hai. Actually yaha ek case hua tha "Victoria Stafford" wherea young girl was abducted and killed. Such heinous crimes are rare but when they do happen they shakeup the entire society around them.

wo hee dimag mai tha.

Thanks for

Sneha said...

@ Dhanya
Thanks.:)

Sneha said...

@ Tulipspeak
Thanks and welcome to my blog.:)

Sneha said...

@ Arv,
Thanks.:)

dreamer said...

loved the way you portrayed it!!Keep writing!!

Sneha said...

@ Nainika,

Sukriya.:)

Vishwanath Seshadri said...

Hi Sneha,

Neat blog - very few words but a deep impact..

Thanks for your kind words of encouragement in my blog.

cheers

Vish

Superunknown said...

Thoughtful one Sneha. I have lack of words to say right now beyond this.

ASWANI said...

really good one. very thoughtful :)

Harshita said...

I don't think am talented enuff to comment here... Bow down to you.. for relating these words to a kid's plight...

Beautiful Sneha...

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

:) great.. well done.. thats all i have to say sneha..

Anupam said...

nice thoughts sneha!

bhanu said...

Wrote with excruciating precision!

Mahi said...

Very true and relevant! A great thought:)

Amal Bose said...

nice thought n beautiful representation...

keep up the good work :)

Suyog said...

hi Sneha , first of all sry for commernting after long time as my exams were there....u knw that..

the post shows u have a deep thought process...u simply rock !!

Sneha said...

@ Vishwanath Seshadri ,
Thanks

@Superunknown
Thanks

@Aswani
Thanks
@ harshita
Thanks

@ Shravan
Thanks
@Anupam

Thanks
@bhanu

thanks

@Amal
Thanks

@ mahi

Thnaks
@suyog
Thanks

Sneha said...

@ Suyog,

Muzey peta hai yaar mention karney ki jarurat hee nahi thi.No sorry worry.:)
just chill.:)

AD said...

i simply loved it!
word for word!

Sneha said...

@ AD
Thanks.:)