Sunday, May 24, 2009

My Twinkling Evening Star




The sun has bid adieu to the weary day


Now the blanket of misty clouds cover the sky


With the twilight all set to embrace the darkness


Amid a gust of wind that blows through


I sit atop the hillock with my eager wait for you


That soon ends


Aloha! the twinkling evening star


I spot you peeping from behind the clouds


And make a wish upon you


The child in me rejoices


With my hope rekindled


That the wish I make tonight be fulfilled


And the illuminating starlight fill my soul



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28 comments:

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

thats an awesome appreciation of the nature.. and reading it,
The child in me rejoices With my hope rekindled
That the wish I make tonight be fulfilled
And the illuminating starlight fill my soul

well done Sneha..

Sam said...

hey sneha wlcum back with a bang.

Dhanya said...

Sneha wishing upon the first star she sees huh ? Even I do that :D

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Amen !

Anonymous said...

kya sneha, ek sitare ke liye itna intezaar? :P

-abhishek

Arv said...

heart warming :)

take care mate.. cheers...

manivannan said...

Each words of yours reflects the beauty of Mother Nature. Awesome sneha!

And when you find time, check out my post, it is also about Nature :-)

Take care friend.

Cheers!

Pallav said...

Thsi si called back with bang..
well
u hv written superbly..
the way u hv described nature..

kudos to u..

Pallav

dreamer said...

Superbly written...inspired by your post today I will wait in the twilight to make my wish upon a star!!Keep writing!!:):):)

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

nice! i love romancing the twilight too!
:)

Harshita said...

It tickled the child inside me too.

Loved it yaar... and glad u r back to the blog again... par blog ke saath yeh ON-OFF rishta kaisa...

Ab aaye ho.. toh thoda thehar ke jaana :)

Amal Bose said...

that was an awesome write up..
really enjoyed it.
good job :)

Sneha said...

@ Shravan

thanks
@sam
Thanks

Sneha said...

@ Dhanya,
It gives a lovely feeling. Dont you think so? :)

@Hobo
:)

Sneha said...

@ Abhishek,
ek sitara nahi hai .ANMOL sitara hai,:)

Sneha said...

@ Arv,
Thanks
@mani,
Your post was fabulous.:)

Sneha said...

@ pallav
Thanks.:)

@Nainika,
jaur karna u will feel good.:) and do tell me you experience.:)

Sneha said...

@Bikram,
ok.:)

Sneha said...

@ Harshita,
aapka hukum sar aankho per.;)
love
Sneha

Sneha said...

@ Amal,
Thanks.:)

have a nice day.:)

PULKIT said...

written beautifully sneha!
where is the followers widget of your blog?
I wanted to join it...

:)


ur blog is very noce sneha! and aapka naam bhi bahut acha hai.
keep writing!
god bless u!

regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

Sneha said...

@ Pulkit,
Thanks for the appreciation. I put the widget on the blog. :)

have a nice day.:)

Nidzzi said...

hey nice post. child inside us always peep from time to time. i also have written something abt bachpan on my joint blog. do read.
www.shitforat.blogspot.com

Sneha said...

@ Nidhi,

sure abi padhti hun.:)

SAHITYIKA said...

hi dear..
nice poem...
u knw i too love to see moon n stars..
they r buddies of mine.. :D
wanna say something to them??? :)

Sneha said...

@ Sahitiyika,

O ! really.:)

That's nice.:)

sawan said...

beautiful!

Sneha said...

@ sawan
Thanks.:)