Thursday, December 11, 2008

Between me and the devil time


On this misty foggy stormy night
You have succeeded in stealing my wings
You celebrate, you laugh and you dance
You are happy, rejoicing at my bleeding wounds
I can't fly anymore
can't kiss the stars and can't compete with my old folks

But O devil time,
I bet, you are still a loser
As you can't steal my soul, my faith and my self-belief,
I am still laughing, celebrating and having fun all around
Go away, I challenge thee,
And try scheming another plan to conquer me


60 comments:

Sam said...

Woo hooo, somebody got the spirits and power to conquer the devil time in a grand way!!

Sam said...

let the devil come back and this time punch it so hard making it difficult or impossible to return!!

Do it!!

Sneha said...

sure with friends like you kicking back the devil time becomes lot easy.:)

dil ki pyar said...

wow.....awesome lines about the perfect time....

the beauty of the poem here is not just the words or the way they are written together...but the in thing here is beautiful....the feel is awesome and the thought is superb....

perfect Sneha...i loved it...!!!

Sneha said...

Hey Yamini,
Great to know that you Liked it.:)
Have a nice day !!

Harshita said...

An inspiring post for me... ;)

Everytime I feel ditched by time, I will go ahead n read it aloud.

Sneha said...

Hi harshita
I am flattered :)
I pray that you never need to read this.

manivannan said...

Wonderful and inspiring poem Sneha! I agree with "Dil ki pyar". The feel we get is awesome.

And I'm touched by your reply for Harshita.

Have a great day friend :)

Sneha said...

Thanks manivannan.
Harshita is a sweetheart.:)

Hobo ........ ........ said...

kya baat hai...
claps !!!

Sam said...

Sneha, get a print out of this poem on a large paper and fix it in ur livin room....i m gonna do it to kick off the time when it turns devil!!

Toonfactory said...

Greatttt.....really loved the lines Sneha!!!BTW I liked Gandhism & Sneha-ism wali post too

Arv said...

now thats what I call a good Shout at the Devil :)

If I could sing 'Bring it on' to the devil, I will try to use your poem :)

Good one mate... cheers...

shafeeq sha said...

i saw a lovely blog today.....so the devil didn't see me


Write well

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

the devil has more important pressing work than to meddle in my life as of now...or perhaps he gave up when he found out i was enough trouble for myself!
:P

Sneha said...

@hobo
Sukriyah !!!
@Sam
Thanks for generous appreciation.:)
@Alok
Thanks

Sneha said...

@Arv
That's whats called the fighting spirit.
have a nice evening !!
have fun in Cali :)

@shfeeq
thanks for visiting by my blog.:)

Sneha said...

@Bikram,

he he he
That's a very humours comment.
I liked it.
keep smiling.:)

Nidhi said...

smart post
1st para all sad sad week..
second para taking courage for all ur weakness.
kabhi mat Jhuk.
sir utha k jiyo. we all r thr for u in ur bad times..
ask devil to knock some other door :P

Sneha said...

Hey Nidhi
Thanks for lovely words.:)
Its a belief of your loved ones in your strength that moves you ahead.

Off the cuff said...

All this time i missed the blogger's ville...loved you explored gandhism and ended up finding snehaism...And on top of it i loved the poem thanks fore giving us reasons to smile.

LifeSmiles:) said...

self esteem make individual to achieve and conquer all the heights of this world :)

Kartz said...
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Kartz said...

Just one itch - it's loser

Loose means unwound/unfastened - a loose end... (A common error)

Good 'un, otherwise.

Peace.

Aevi said...

awesomely awesome... me being a naive at it had to re-iterate 3-4 time to get the pith...

beautiful

Razigan said...

Nicely written,......

I thought of classifying this poem either in spiritual, philosophical, romantic, or any kind of title.
But this is not fitting in any kind. Rather U total blog doesn't. But all of them are cute.

My wOrLd... said...

wow.....kool...
u rayt well sneha....
god bless....

Toonfactory said...

Hey thanks for visiting my blog and commenting..so when U gonna post a new entry here gal?

Mahi said...

Wow, guess u have a lot of self control! Great lines:)

Rajesh said...

That was too good...Inspiring...so taking on the devils???

btw...too good a layout...keep it going.. :)

Sneha said...

@ kartz
Sorry for my glitch.
Thanks for correcting me.:)
@ Rahul ,
Thanks
@Lifesmiles
Thanks
@Abinav
Thanks

Sneha said...

@ razigan,shifiq sha
Thanks for visiting my blog.:)

have a nice day.:)

Sneha said...

Hey Mahi
How are you dear?
so enjoing holidays back home .:)
Hello my world,
Thanks .:)
Hi Rajesh
Thanks for the appreciation .:)

Sam said...

Hello hello girl, time for new post and new magic of words......

chalo ji jaldi karo!!

Amrita~Ams said...

applause !

:)

Toonfactory said...

Hey great to hv U on my blog again...well well LUCKY U...that's all I can say...so where is that Utopian culture where all U have is DVDs and Books all around U Sneha???Can I join U too???

Sneha said...

Hey Alok,
I live in Calgary where public/university libraries are too good and networked all across
Canada.:)

Sneha said...

@sam
bore nahi huey itni post sey.:)
@Amrita
Thanks :)

Sam said...

didnt get u....u meant by post on ur or mine blog ?

Sneha said...

@Sam
of course mera POST marey BLOG per.:)

KParthasarathi said...

I stumbled on your blog and read your poem.Amazing blog and superb poem.
Pray, tell me where do you get such fine templates for the blog.I wish to change mine

Sneha said...

Hi KParthasarathi ,
Thanks for the appreciation i have just changed the background picture of my template but i can give you a link from where you can change your log template.:)
http://www.allblogtools.com/
http://www.thecutestblogontheblock.com/
Have a nice day !!

Toonfactory said...

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Kartz said...

Merry X-Mas to you and all your family... May the Holy Spirit usher in times of affluence and harmony.

Peace on Earth, goodwill to men.

crackpot said...

nice blog :)

luved every poem of urs :)
happy new yr:)

Manasa said...

Well written!

Sneha said...

@Crackpot & Manasa
Thanks
Happy new year.:)

BABA said...

Post tou badhiya hai hi lekin
Blog ka design bada acha lagra hai.

Sneha said...

Aachcha bhai tuney approve kar diya tou maan leti hun. :)

crackpot said...

thxs shena for visiting :)

Shravan said...

hi sneha, just read the pome, great one.. as some one said, am going to get this one printed and pasted on my wall :) hope you wont mind breaking the ©rules this time :)

wishing you a fantastic new year to come with a merries and fun in life.

have a bright day ahead :)

Sneha said...

Hi Shravan,
Glad u like the poem i have no problems in your using the poem whatsoever.The copyscape banner is just for fun ;).
Wishing the same to u too.
have a great day ahead :)
Sneha

Chriz said...

and good that you conquered the devil/time.. have a great new year ..

god bless

Sam said...

snehaji, will u accept a bribe cum choclate box for a new post ?

Sneha said...

Hi Chriz,
Wish the same to you too.:)
thanks for stopping by my blog.

dreamer said...

captivating lines........lovely contrast between the gloom of the first stanza and the never say die spirit of the second.......just lovely....must say it is one of your best poems.

I also believe that it is not the circumstances but we that determine our fate between happiness and sorrow.

Hope all your dreams come true and you frequently be dictated such best words from your muse....HAPPY NEW YEAR 2009!!!!!

Sneha said...

Thanks dreamer
wish the same to you too,:)

अविनाश said...

But O devil time,
I bet, you are still a loser
As you can't steal my soul, my faith and my self-belief,
I am still laughing, celebrating and having fun all around

Nice one

Sneha said...

@Avinash
Thanks.:)