Monday, December 29, 2008

All over again




Born from the wet clay spinning around the wheel
forbearing the journey through fire valiantly
transforming into a hard shiny ceramic
to face the world and embrace its all-pervasive misery
with equanimity and joy
and then with time, with no whimper and grudge towards none
wither into earth only to be molded back in the soft wet clay all over again


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32 comments:

Aevi said...

that is really true and a deep thought. Its so much true and I never actually thought of relating the 2 things together... (us/life n pottery)

This was beautiful and it reflects how deep n grave ur thots are.

The way u presented the analogy in poetry is worth appriciatin.. m sharin it in my Greader feeds

yamini meduri said...

wow great thought and beautiful lines.....!!!

keep the good working going dear..!!!

Sam said...

good lines....A new concept!!


it depicts the journey going full round circle in gentle manner....

perhaps thats how our life shud be.....

BTW u removed my award ? :(

Sneha said...

@Aevi,
Thanks.:)
@yamini
thanks.:)
@ sam
thanks and jera thoda scroll karo right side mai dekho.:)

BABA said...

Nice poem and very nice pic for this poem.

Sneha said...

@Gaurav
haan bhai kyo nahi pic tou tuzey achchi legegi hee tuney jo search kar key dee hai .:)

My wOrLd... said...

true one....
nicely ryttn....
need 2 face da world boldly....
god bless...
tc!!!

abhishek said...

fantabulous poem as usual

KParthasarathi said...

Short and sweet poem nicely said

manivannan said...

Amazing ! Very profound! I'm inspired... You've beautifully related the two things. Congrats!

BTW can I know how were you inspired?

manivannan said...

Forget to tell about your new template and your lines about creativity....Both are awesome!

Liked a lot :)

Sam said...

no award there ji :(....

Harshita said...

*Applaud*

Like Aevi, even I cud never relate life n pottery...but with these lines... I thought...n then I was deep into thoughts...

You are really an amazing person and writer...

How abt me add a list of most recommended blog posts?? You inspire me for that now and You will hv many of ur posts linedup thr...trust me :)

pisku said...

You are quite a poet!
linked u :)

Kartz said...

Multum, in parvo.

An update after quite some time. Hope all is well.

Peace.

---
A very happy and prosperous New Year to you and yours...

Peace.

Arv said...

Now... wont that be nice to do from time to time :)


have a nice year... cheers...

dreamer said...

Simple lines that store the mystery of existence and narrate the tale of life and death........EXCELLENT!!enjoyed reading!!

Girijesh Srivastava said...

I liked the creativity in both, the poem and the facelift of blog!

Keep it up!

Happy new year :)

Off the cuff said...

very good keep it up...

Happy new year to you

R

haritha said...

a gr8 typed words wid gr8 meaning,,,
wel written
do visit ma blog n comment deary...
as iam commentoholic

hhehhehhe
haritha

www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com

Amrita~Ams said...

gr8 yar :)

Hobo ........ ........ said...

Wishing peace & prosper 2009.

Sneha said...

@Rugma,Abhishek,KParthasarathi
Thanks .:)

Sneha said...

@manivanna,
It is as The Gita says that our present body and personality is one of the many physical beings or incarnations of our soul. And this is an endless cycle untill and unless the soul merges in the Brahmn
or the lord .
thanks for liking the template but the lines in header are from the web.:)

Sneha said...

@ harshita
Thats flattering harshita.:)
but tarif achchi bhi leg rehi hai.:)

Sneha said...

@pisku
welocome and thanks.:)
@ kartz,
yeah everything is fine.:)
@ dreammer
Thanks

Sneha said...

@ Girijesh,Rahul,Arv,harita,Amrita,Hobo
Thanks everyone for reading and appreciating .:)

अविनाश said...

lovely lines

Sneha said...

@ Avinash
Thanks.:)
have a nice day.:)

Gaurav said...

Khargosh tere Blog pe tou bade sare comments atey hain aur mereko tou koi poochta hi nahi. >o.o<

Koi ni beta dekhlunga tereko.

Sneha said...

@Gaurav
mai comments tary blog per transfer kar deti hun.:)

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