Tuesday, October 21, 2008

My Wish

If I had wings
I would fly to wherever you were
If I had colors
I would paint your life with my magical hues
If I were the sun
I would bring warmth to your cold & gloomy days
If I were the moon
I would beam down my light to make your life bright
If I were a star
I would twinkle in your life
If I were the rain
I would wash away your pains
My simple wish is I hope to be the joy of your life

22 comments:

manivannan said...

Beautiful wish!

May it come true :)

Harshita said...

Another masterpiece from the poetess.

Beautiful :)

Happy Blogging.

Nidhi said...

if i were perfume .. i wud be all over ur body!!! :)

Arv said...

beautiful one... and may you have all the joy in your life too :)

Have a nice evening mate... cheers mate...

Girijesh Srivastava said...

"Wish"wast सूत्रों से पता चला है कि एक शख्श ने आपके poem की बहुत तारीफ़ की है...Here is an excerpt:

If I had wings
I would fly to wherever you were
(माँ कसम, increasing airfare को counter करने का best तरीका है ये)

If I had colors
I would paint your life with my magical hues
(बस करो, Nerolac वालों का business बंद करवाना है क्या?)

If I were the sun
I would bring warmth to your cold & gloomy days
(लो कर लो बात, ऐसे तो सारे doctors, तांत्रिक, और मसाज़ वाले बेरोजगार हो जायेंगे)

If I were the moon
I would beam down my light to make your life bright
(ये लो, अब bulb और tubelight वालों के पीछे पड़ गई ये लड़की)

If I were a star
I would twinkle in your life
(अक्षय कुमार is already a star and also has Twinkle in his life! तेरा क्या होगा रे कालिया...)

If I were the rain
I would wash away your pains
(Ahem...Liquified झंडू बाम! बहुत आएगा काम)

My simple wish is I hope to be the joy of your life
(If winter comes, can spring be far behind!)

abhishek said...

jo bhi ye 'you' hai kavita me...bahut lucky insaan jan ppadta hai...

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

Ahh!! lovely. may all ur dreams n wishes come true :)

thanks for ur visit.

take care :)

Karthik said...

If i were the fingers
I would grasp you so hard not to let you out

Gud one sneha!!!!

Punam said...

Such sweet beautiful words!

Sneha said...

Hey Manivannan,harshita,Nidhi,arv girijesh,abhishek,preethilata,kartik and punam,

Thank you all for liking the poem.:)

dreamer said...

Nice poem sneha..........but an honest confession......I liked Girijesh Srivastava's comment much more........it was hillarious and entertaining.

One last question.......for whom are these whises :)

IndianPie said...

wonderful thoughts !

Mahi said...

Awesomely written! May ur wish come true:)

vemuri said...

hmm good one..... really good

Kartz said...

Touching... :) Well written!

aks said...

Hi Sneha, HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU, YOUR FAMILY and ALL YOUR FRIENDS !

Manasa said...

Beautiful poem.

Wish all your dreamz come true :)

Sneha said...

Hi Dreammer,Indianpie,mahi,vemuri,Kartz,manasa
Thanks you all for liking the poem
happy diwali.:)

Aevi said...

lovely lines... loved it.

It has so many aspects to it.. it romantic... its like the words of a mother to her kid... its like elder brother to his sibbling... father to his son...

b'ful thots

Sneha said...

Hi Aevi,
Liked your comment you presented a fresh perspective. :)

HOBO said...

Wow...
Thinking good about others is humanity.

Sneha said...

Hi Hobo
Thanks.:)