Friday, August 8, 2008

Hide N Seek

The counting is done & I open my eyes

Searching you behind the clouds, stars and the blue sky

Seasons have passed, but my quest for your hiding place is still not over

My heart is pounding, I give up

My soul whispers, I am tired

Come out from your den please

Now you seek & let me hide


* This post is for my brother who rests in peace in an other world than ours.


Harshita Kamal Mehta said...

Lovely sure he is listening...and he knws u love him a lot...he loves u too gal n wud always want u to be stay happy... Take care

Nidhi said...

amazing, yup i too agree with Harshita. He'll come. Lets cross our fingers for Sneha.

Zubin said...


Mahi said...

Wonderful! I'm sure your brother who's up there is appreciating this lovely verse.

Nidhi said...

tht was for ur brother??

Sneha Shrivastava said...

Hi Nidhi
Yes, it is for my brother.

Off the cuff said...

I have got goose bumps;


dreammer said...


Girijesh said...

I'm just short of words! May be these lines would do...

जाने चले जाते हैं कहाँ, दुनिया से जानेवाले, जाने चले जाते हैं कहाँ,
कैसे ढूंढे कोई उनको, नहीं कदमों के भी निशाँ

जाने है वो कौन नगरिया,
आए जाए ख़त ना खबरिया,
आए जब जब उनकी यादें,
आए होठों पे फरियादें,
जाके फिर ना आने वाले
जाने चले जाते हैं कहाँ