Sunday, August 31, 2008

रेत....

निर्मल,शाँत,सहज ओर सौम्य

दुर से तुम ऐसी ही प्रतीत होती हों

जितना करीब आई तुम्हारे

हैरान थी यह देख कर, कैसे

कण कण को अपने मे समेट कर

संपूर्ण दिखती हों

हवा का झोंका कुछ साथ लाया और कुछ ले गया

तुमहे कुछ और बिखेर गया

नित्य नया रूप लेती हो

फिर भी शाँत, सहज कैसे तुम रहती हों ?

20 comments:

Arv said...

Any chances of an English translation ? :)

Have a nice day mate... cheers...

Sneha said...

Hi arv
Let me try and do it.
have a nice day.:)

Nidhi said...

Nice as always :0
Cheers !!

Off the cuff said...

Hi,

Simply nirmal sahaj and saumya...amazing

ret par likh rahi ek unmit ibarat,
har jhonke mein naya roop naya sringar;
bana raha hai vichar ki ek majboot imarat.

Keep rocking.
R

Sneha said...

Thanks Nidhi
have a nice day !!
*Hugs*

Sneha said...

Hi Rahul,
Appreciation from a person who writes so well is always encouraging.:)

have a nice day.

Sneha

Harshita said...

Sneha,

I have become a big pankhaa of ur writing as well as poetry skills...

Ret kahin naa kahin humaari zindagi jaisi hi toh dikhti hain...
Hawaa/toofan aata hain, bikher deta hain sab yahan wahan...
Fir bhi honsla rakhti hain zindagi...
ek nayi subah aati hain...aur fir ek naya toofan...fir bhi muskurati hain zindagi..

Hain ki nahi!!
:)

Loved it immensely...

P.S. You shud copyright your poems.

Cheers
Harshita

ANWESA said...

vry gud feel,luvd it..

Abhinav Agrawal said...

no doubt in it tht it is a b'ful poem... but what i loved most in it is your hindi. You didnt use any word from urdu which most of the people tend to do...!!!

the poem really doesnt sound naive its sounds from a grave n observant poet... u rock

...ret ke gharondo mei mainey bhi swapn sanjoye the... pawan deti hai roop unhe nitya nirala

cheers

Sneha said...

@ Harshita,
Thanks dear

@ anwesa
thanks

@abhinav
Thanks for the appreciation.

dreammer said...

nice and thoughtful!!

Sneha said...

Thanks dreammer.
Have a nice day.:)

IndianPie said...

wonderfully written..

Sneha said...

Hi Indianpie,
thanks.
have a nice day.:)

amit said...

hi amit here , thanx for visting my page.
i like your poaetry about
" ret".
"ye ret hi shant hai, ye ret hi toofan,
kabhi ye tapti, kabhi ye sheetal jaan,
hum bhi bane is maati se,
fir bhi bhed bhav hain jab ki hain sab ek samaan "

Sneha said...

Hi Amit,
Thanks for the appreciation.
have a nice day.:)

HOBO said...

Excellent...
Claps !!!

Sneha said...

Thanks hobo.:)

Girijesh Srivastava said...

Hi Sneha,

Few lines for you, your brother and your poetry!

कागज़ की चंद लकीरों में
रेत पे बनती तस्वीरों में

अक्सर मैंने उसको देखा
हाथों में नही जिसकी रेखा

कहाँ हो गुम तुम, देकर गम
बाकी हैं बस कागज़, रेत और हम

Sneha said...

Lovely lines Girijesh.
Have a nice day.